Suddenly as Ronald had water falls drifting down his face. the space ship was over heating, his face was as red a cooked tomato the heat was slowly rising over 50 degrees. But as he looked in front of him heat wasn’t the only problem there was there was a massive meteorite flying right between his eyes going 72km he only had one choice to do and there was only 1% chance of him living. He put on his helmet with seconds left till the meteorite hit him then he said his goodbyes and opened the window. He fiercely got vacuumed out as quickly as the speed of sound.
Braxton I love the descriptive words you use in your writing!
Thank you